As you say, a very beautiful model!
The setting however leaves much to be desired. The kitchen background with clothes thrown over chairs, etc. presents the appearance of a snapshot rather than a well thought out photograph. With such a beautiful model, use the beauty in some complimenting settings. Even a plain background could be used to accent her. Keep shooting with her!

What Gary is trying to say is that another background setting, less messy, would keep the eyes on the model.

Fewer distractions is helping you to bring out the model and her beauty.

Also would have liked to see the eyes being sharper (more in focus).

White balance looks a bit off giving a slight yellow:ish tone (can be corrected easily in post editing though) .

Use this model with a proper setup/background and it will be more successful! She definitely deserves it!

Sexy model and another nice crir moserArtsit

I woould try to choose a background that would not merge with the outline of her wonderful body........Beautiful model!
Carlos

Lol. the background She just playing at the kitchen door.

Nice shot, has a lot of potential, bg is a bit distracting and pose could be improved, well done...

Agree with the comments on the background, just try to experiment a little with focus and a different bg!

Everything is said above.Nice photo!
Cheers!